Her name is María{1}. She is from El Guincho and she is in class with me.

She is very{***}Good choice of vocabulary! beautiful. She is tall but{***}Good choice of vocabulary! she is not very{***}Good choice of vocabulary! thin. Her eyes are blue and she has got short,Punctuation or capitalization wavy fair hair. María has a long face and her skin is quite{***}Good choice of vocabulary! fair. Sometimes, she uses glasesSpelling mistake forWrong word/s read. She is 14 years old tooThis text is not necessary{2}. She has a round nose and small ears. María usallySpelling mistake wears jeans and a t-shirt with a scarf. She is very elegant, because{***}Good choice of vocabulary! her clothes are very pretty and she knows chooseWrong word/s.

She is intelligent and she has got good ideas. María is very optimistWrong word/s {3}and happy but she is a litleSpelling mistake disorganized. Too,Word order she is extroverted. María is a girl very friendly, sincere and honestWord order and she is not jealous or{***}Good choice of vocabulary! aggresiveSpelling mistake . She is funny and she is not unpopular or popular.

She lifeWrong word/s with her parents. They are teachers in La Guancha's school. They have a large house. She haveGrammar mistake got 4 brothers.{***}Paragraphing problem

She is a student. She likes going to school every daysGrammar mistake. She goGrammar mistake to school by car with her father at 8:00. She likes theThis text is not necessary animals, she has two tortoiseWrong word/s {4}in a litleSpelling mistake pool. She loves toThis text is not necessary music, she loveGrammar mistake listenGrammar mistake to El Canto del Loco. She likes doing gimnasticSpelling mistake and swimming. Now, she speaks SpanisSpelling mistake, {***}Missing word or wordsEnglish. María loves traveling{5}. She traveled{6} to AustralianWrong word/s, the USA, Germany, the UK…This text is not necessary and more. She likes shopping {***}Missing word or wordsclothes and meetGrammar mistake withThis text is not necessary her friends.

I think that María{7} is a good person and I am her friend because she is good with me and she offers me advice and help.{8} {9}